tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7417991678064714961.post3346636746063095811..comments2014-07-01T15:38:17.514-04:00Comments on Manny's Way: The Red Phantom and The Quiet Man in "Warehouse Battle"Manny DeJesushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14991403609783440122noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7417991678064714961.post-47584065705549736822010-05-13T22:14:38.520-04:002010-05-13T22:14:38.520-04:00Manny,
I'll say this once, and I'll say it...Manny,<br />I'll say this once, and I'll say it again. This adventure you showed us the story and not told us the story. A huge thing many pros still have a hard time doing. I loved the mental pitcures your words gave out. Don't quit, buddy. This is good stuff!<br />Cheers,<br />RandyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7417991678064714961.post-28838303997723566822010-05-13T09:17:12.235-04:002010-05-13T09:17:12.235-04:00Manny, I've read this story a few times and I ...Manny, I've read this story a few times and I have to say, being a big fan of stories that allow my mind to play them like a movie, this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I like that it's descriptive enough to help my mental movie along yet not so descriptive that I can't see a scene the way I would envision it. Good stuff bro.I Like to Write...and Stuffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01442891601813001140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7417991678064714961.post-55533769782593691162010-05-13T09:12:40.472-04:002010-05-13T09:12:40.472-04:00test #3?test #3?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com